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Amber's avatar

I liked that you kept a lighthearted voice for the topics you chose, and that you didn't try to stay serious along with the topic, because it would've been hard to get through otherwise. I liked your formatting and how you went from ten to one, because it made me want to stick around until the end, and I'm glad I did because Attack on Titan is awesome. Very, very sad. But awesome. I liked all of the gifs that you chose because it helped with the lighthearted, funny tone! 😊

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Hello Teo! I thought your voice was great, but was a little unclear at times. You started off with a little humor and would go to sarcastic so I would pick either one and start strong with that voice. You would also tend to get wordy at times. Like instead of saying, "a show intended for children" I would just say "a children's show". This was very hard for me too so don't worry! It's really hard to get out of that habit and "let go" a little. I really enjoyed your topic and I thought you were engaging. The format did make sense and was clear and consistent throughout. The images you chose were great! I like that they seemed to play off of each other like how you chose Zuko saying "that's rough buddy" as you are taking about serious topics just in the paragraph above.

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